‘No care for the sky’- Kritika and Geoff James, in Collaboration

https://undressedthoughts.com/

No care for the sky
The bird was meant to fly high
A flutter of breeze

Boughs whispering wake
Silence stains the break of day
Freedom attracts hope

by
Goff James and Kritika Maheshwari

A collaborative effort of Goff James and Kritika (me) wherein Goff has helped me to understand what a Haiku is. Being a free verse writer, it was a little difficult to fit in words according to rules but his cooperation has given a celebrating break to my style of writing, making this collaboration exciting and successful. Thank you kindly for being patient with me.

You can find the same on Goff’s page link: https://goffjamesart.wordpress.com/2020/04/27/spotlight-poetry-no-care-for-the-sky-a-collaborative-poem-by-kritika-maheshwari-and-goff-james/ and do go through more of his works: https://goffjamesart.wordpress.com

artwork: Diana Turner, Giclee Fine Art

for more from Kritika, click here: https://undressedthoughts.com/

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